Monday 11 July 2011

Explanation Writing

Room 11 have been learning how to write explanations.  Here are some of the fabulous results:

How to do ballet. by Emily
Have you ever done ballet before?
It takes a lot of practice before you dance on the stage.
First you have to make your dance up.
Next you have to make a beautiful dress.
Then you have to practise, practise and more practise.
After that you have to get your make up done and your hair done.
Finally you have to go on the stage and dance.
After all the steps you’re done.


How to plank on a bike.   By Matthew

Have you ever planked from a bike?
It takes a lot of practice to do a plank.
First you put on your helmet and start riding.
Next you lie on your seat and steer.
Finally you are planking.
Now that you have done a plank you can do it over and over again.

How to ride a rip stick. By Lily
Have you ever wondered how to ride a rip stick?
It takes lots of practice to ride a rip stick.
First you have to hold a pole and hop on it.
Next you have to push away from the pole.
Then you wiggle your hips.
After you go round and round in a circle.
Finally you wiggle and wiggle your hips.
Now you know how to ride a rip stick and you can do it over and over again.



How to make a yummy sandwich .     By Luka
Have you ever wondered how to make a yummy sandwich?
It doesn’t take that long to make a yummy sandwich.
First you wash your hands.
Next you get the bread and put it on the bench.
Then you spread butter and jam.
After that you’ve made your yummy sandwich.
Finally you put it on the plate.
Now since you’ve completed your  task you can eat it.     

Making  Cookies.  By Paul
Have you every wanted to make yummy  cookies .
Its easy to make cookies .
 First you get your cooking stuff and ingredients .
Next you put your egg  in the bowl and boil your butter .
Then you put your  butter in the bowl  and put sugar and flour and olvie oil in the bowl.
After,  you scoop out small handfulls and place on the baking  tray.
Finally you put the tray of cookies in the oven and bake them .
And now you can make yummy cookies and eat them.

How to Make a Healthy Sandwich. By Daljit
How do you make a healthy sandwich?
You need to have all the things to make a sandwich.
First you need to get some bread.
Next you need to put the mayonnaise sauce on.
Then you put all the healthy stuff in. Like tomatoes and lettuce.
Finally your sandwich is ready.
Now that’s how you make a healthy sandwich. Now you should eat it.

Baking a Cake. By Zakia
Have you ever wondered how to bake a cake?
It takes a lot of practise to know how to bake a cake.
First you get the ingredients and get a big bowl.
Then you mix the ingredients together.
Next you put the ingredients in a baking tin.
After you put it in the oven and cook it.
Finally its ready to eat.
Now that you have baked a cake you can eat it.


How to ride a bike.  By Talia
Have you ever wanted to ride a bike?
It’s easy to learn to ride a bike
First put on your helmet.
Next get on your bike and ride slowly.
Then practise stopping on your bike by using the brakes.
After that ride a bit faster and still use your brakes to stop.
Finally you can ride a bike.
Now you know how to ride a bike you can ride on the road.

How to ride a bike. By Callum
Have you ever wanted to ride a bike?
To ride a bike you have to practise.
First you hop on the bike.
Next you use your strongest leg to start to move  the  bike .
Then you try to move for a few minutes, then you’ve got the  hang of it.
Finally you can ride  a bike easily.
Now you can ride a bike you can do tricks.

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